A couple danced awkward and puppetlike
in the background
As the raunchy blues musician
writhed on the floor.
I stared into the disco ball
and tried to decide whether
she sounded more like
Tina Turner or Janis Joplin.
I never did come to a conclusion
because she acted more like a stripper
Than a musician.
And I didn't want to watch anymore.















Comments
oh wow so few words and u set the entire scene told the total story..
wow so brilliant
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I love your comments and your textures
and i think I have the same shoes as that woman...
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Between the night and day there are so few eyes left open your forgiveness ain't a neighborhood I'm looking to live in.
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